That evening, only the men met on Sig’s patio: Sig, Roger, Walter, Gregor and Blain.
Each man described, in turn, what he believed had happened.
Sig had to work over-time to control his temper. He had never had an “easy” relationship with his older brother Walter. Walter's swooning-catch-me routine had pushed a lot of buttons. That was counter-balanced by Jesus's parable about leaving the 99 lambs and searching for the lost one.
Roger had Alice’s first-hand testimony which he repeated back with surprising fidelity. But then, this is not a culture that added extra notes to songs or to “make stories their own” by tweaking details. What was indisputable was that Evan had done something that brought Copperhead Cove to the attention of law enforcement. The first rule of being invisible is to not attract attention. Evan had violated that rule.
Walter was at his wit’s end. Everything had seemed normal until his health tanked. And then his kids starting acting up. They sought the best counseling available but the advice they received only seemed to make things worse.
Walter was also averse to attention from law enforcement, primarily from a cultural standpoint. The problem with seeking professional advice is that it created documentation trails and open-loops. But what had been done could not be changed.
Gregor’s take on the situation was that Evan and Abe needed their asses kicked on a regular basis until they straightened out. While that view got a lot of sympathy, the men doubted that the women would stand for the idea and it could backfire if Evan went to the cops and claimed abuse.
Blain mostly kept his mouth shut. He was reminded of the story of the blind men and the elephant.
After forty-five minutes and a thorough rehashing of what had already been discussed, Blain spoke up. "Let me recap what I think I heard."
“Something has to be done or Walter and his family will have to move out of Copperhead Cove.”
Walter looked around the group of men. He could see their faces in the light of the kerosene lantern. They were nodding their heads in agreement. Sig and and Gregor were nodding without reservation, the possibility that Evan could vandalize the tractor on Gregor's truck was totally unacceptable. Roger was reluctantly nodding. Walter felt trapped.
“Sig, you have too much on your plate to take Evan in hand. And even if you had the time, you have too much history” Blain said.
Both Walter and Sig nodded in agreement.
“Roger, please don’t hear this as criticism, but you are old and whoever rides-herd on Evan has to be able to work him into the ground. Your heart is in the right place but you just have too many miles on the odometer” Blain said.
Roger unhappily agreed. Sig was looking at Blain thoughtfully.
“Gregor, you are the Swiss Army Knife of Copperhead Cove. You can do everything. It would be a shame to pin you down with trying to rehabilitate Evan...and Abe if it comes to that. Push is coming to shove and we need to keep you flexible.”
Gregor could not disagree. Gregor’s arrival had been a huge boost to the productivity of Copperhead Cove. Not just because he was young, strong and skilled, but because he had a truck and contacts on the outside.
Looking directly at Walter, Blain said "You had your swing at the pinata. Evan knows how to manipulate you and his mother. He can read you like a book. It is time for you and Evan's mom need to pull-back. Let him know that you love him...and at the same time he needs tough-love. It is time for him to grow-up and not hide behind Mommy and Daddy."
Looking around at the men, Blain said “And that leaves me.”
None of the men would have thought to involve Blain. It was a family matter. But the way Blain sketched it out, it was the only way forward that made any sense. And, even though he had not been married to Sarah for very long, it did, technically, make him family.
Blain looked around at the circle of men, men he had come to trust with his life. It was time to share some history.
“Fifteen years ago I wasn’t that different from Evan. My parents were struggling to control me and put me in counseling, so I have some idea of what Evan has been through” Blain said. Then, looking at Walter, "And what he is putting you and Amira through."
“I think I can make a difference, but there are a few things that I need. Not just “want”...but need. If you can’t agree to help me then we might as well tell Walter to pack-up and leave tomorrow morning.”
Sig spoke up first. “What do you need?”
Sig resented his older brother. Sig found everything about Walter’s wife, Amira, irritating. He had a hundred different reasons to send Walter packing.
But family trumped all and as much as it galled him...there was that parable about lambs.
Sometimes a dog needs a long leash, sometimes it has to be very short. This is interesting and I'm not sure where you will go with it.
ReplyDeleteSo Blaine is finally ready to invest himself. Copperhead Cove has made a an out of him.
ReplyDeleteTypos-
ReplyDelete“averse”, not “adverse”
parents, not parent’s
I am truly enjoying this story. You’re doing a fine job!
Psi! It seams two be my fete to skew up.
DeleteWill be interesting to see how this writes out.
ReplyDeleteInteresting as in Chinese curse? Time will tell.
In my decades of EMS and seeing such out of control kids being "rehabilitated" I've seen ONE turn his life around.
But then again I've seen ZERO after meth addiction.
So hope springs eternal, as long as the damage is contained.
Incomplete thoughts, I'd secure the firearms, keep smaller children and elders under observation around those two troublemakers and have an alert eye and nose for fire. Evan will try to get his brother into the fracas against "Rehabilitation".
ReplyDeleteThose are the worst weapons of a young revengeful terrorist. I'd view both of them as such until proven otherwise.
Make it clear to them that one such problem will lead to both of them being on the road. They will be blindfolded and hauled as near to St. Louis as good sense allows. Then they'll be pointed in the right direction and left. I doubt they paid enough attention to know exactly where they were at the Cove. Things are hard and getting harder and there is little time or available resources to spend fixing them.
DeleteAll that said, having two more sets of hands, voluntarily willing to contribute, would be a great boon to the Cove.
Grateful for all you post on this blog. Thank you.
ReplyDelete“Roger, please don’t hear this as criticism, but you are old and whoever rides-herd on Evan has to be able to work him into the ground. Your heart is in the right place but you just have too many miles on the odometer” Blain said. - Dear Lord, do we not all?
ReplyDeleteThis seems like the logical choice and Blain's experience gives him a unique perspective. And it worked for him, at least once he got to Copperhead Cove.
I am interested to see what he asked for.
Working Evan into the ground? Is this the chap that ran away and only a sensible policewoman brought him back to earth and back to the Cove? You know the Police who ASKED Him if His Parents struck him? And was sensible enough to return the kid to the "Amish" WITHOUT Calling Social Services.
ReplyDeleteAre you going to keep him locked up like a prisoner?
Wanna make a bet that the next time Evan would rat out Blain as His ABUSER when an authority asked that sort of question again?
Re-read is responses to the Policewoman if you doubt that idea.
Copperhead Cove has a coral snake or two in it tonight.
In my area we have 3 (yes THREE) very expensive schools to rehabilitate troubled kids. Their return to the school upon "Rehab-Graduation" is almost 100% until they get their HS diploma and are deemed "Adults" and thus out of the system.
As EMS and Operating room these schools are much of our police reports, EMS runs and operations to remove fragments of broken knives, etc. that they SWALLOWED as so they can ESCAPE the school's rules for a while. These kids are pretty much secured 24-07 with the worst offender's school being quite some distance out in the woods from anything.
Yet, runaways happen and sometimes locals get harsh with them.
As I read this story, a pair of spoiled kids with indulgent parents living in the luxury of central heating and air, frozen pizza, Chinese food or delivery, internet, cell phones, violent mixed martial arts gamers and all that to the COVE, HARD WORK, hard beds, wood stoves and Quote "Hide the meagre supply of sugar" from those kids at the mush for breakfast part of the story.
Sorry the one successful rehab I've known WANTED TO MAKE SOMETHING OF HIMESELF. Wanted Better than the poor, woodstove, maybe meth cooking hillbilly lifestyle. Became a police officer and a good one, married raised three outstanding kids.
What are we offering these kids compared to what they were forced out of?
Magical thinking, kids think if they run away, they can GO BACK to Happy Land. Using Authorities to get revenge and or that Happy Land is something they hear about on TV and internet.
Seldom do they think hypothermia or child snuff-porno are going to get them instead.
It is comments like this that make this format, installments on the internet, something special.
DeleteGuys like you and Dan read the situation and you can inject reality.
I want to tip my hand a little bit. If you take a really long perspective, the cost of losing 40% of your productive males was simply unsustainable even fifty years ago. What changed? Why can it be afforded? What factors changed that enabled the squandering of the human capital?
As a simple reality check, as late as 1980 there was a fire alarm on the corner of Osborn and Fulton Place Dr. If you did not have a phone in your house and you had to report a fire, you ran to the fire alarm which looked like a street-light but the post was painted red, broke the glass and yanked down on the bar.
Now, homeless people have phones. Ten-year-old-children have phones. Illegal aliens have phones. Drug addicts have phones. The negligible cost of sending a signal is the root-cause of our societal epilepsy. Spasms can amplify and increase without bounds at no cost explicit cost to the misfiring neurons.
I am willing to bet money that Evan and Abe will never see their phones again. And they will lose the contacts they have back in St Louis.
Cold-restart.
Joe it's your story and an excellent one indeed.
DeleteCold-Restart works pretty well on computers and some machinery. They don't have memories and a sense of Vengeance. Humans DO.
A quote from your story:
Looking more closely at his face, she saw a split lip and the promise of a magnificent shiner. “Your parents do that to you?” she asked.
“Naw. They wouldn’t dare” the boy sneered. “I got jumped by a hillbilly.”
Well, that ruled out domestic abuse although Canina might have turned a blind-eye in this case. The kid radiated insolence.
Social Services might have a word with the Cove, supported by policemen (plural), IF Evan runs away and complains about ABUSE. Blain has a history he ran from.
I'll stop now.
That kid is going to betray them as a group. They need to get him on a bus, or airplane, with a ticket to the place furthest from them they can think of.---ken
ReplyDeleteBefore they put the cell phones up a little video of the carnage which should be ongoing in the city might go a long way to reorient a confused mind. Kids seem to respond to what they see on their phone whether it is true or not.
ReplyDeleteMy fix would be for Blaine to give it his best shot. If that fails, a bus ticket back "home". Security for both boys is going to be a problem.
ReplyDeleteAgain, the comments are outstanding.
Still, great story telling, ERJ. Must stop by, every day.
I agree GREAT Storytelling. I do read daily, also.
DeleteBut I doubt the bus ticket home would be a good idea. Too many variables including Social Services getting into the business of the very private life of Blain and the "Amish".
The story is in at odd era where Chaos and burning flesh happens but Government overreach "Do Gooders" still have firepower protecting their deeds.
Not a good situation for someone with a "Past".