Friday, March 15, 2024

No Mercy (Cumberland Saga)

 


Alice could hear muttering through the door and based by the sounds of the shifting of feet and groaning of the porch, knew there were at least two men on her porch, and big men at that.

Lightning shook his head in frustration. Time was wasting.

“My car broke down. I need to use your phone” Lightning demanded.

“I am sorry your car broke down” the elderly voice quavered.

Alice could tell the men were restless, the sound fidgeting on the other side of the door increased.

After a count of two, Alice asked “Don’t you have one of those smartie-phone things?”

“My battery is dead” Lightning snapped out.

“Why don’t you go back to your car and wait in it. I’m sure somebody will see you. We got friendly neighbors. I’m sure somebody will stop and help” Alice advised.

Lightning said “That won’t work. I am parked off the road. Nobody gonna see the car.”

Lightning changed tactics. “I gotta pee. Lemme in so I can use your bathroom!”

“You musta passed a thousand trees walking up here from the road. You can use any one a’ them when you walk back” Alice helpfully suggested.

Davey snickered. Lightning gave him an elbow. It was like thumping a blubber covered refrigerator.

Lightning was frustrated. He was used to people bending and caving to avoid confrontation. That was the norm, certainly when confronted by a big, angry man covered in prison tatts. The old biddy on the other side of the door wasn’t going with the flow.

Time to stop playing games.

“Listen, lady. Either you let me in or I am going to smash this door to pieces and let myself in” Lightning said, voice filled with menace.

Alice laid a hand on the door and reinforced it with a quick, silent prayer. The door was made from 2" tongue-and-groove planks of native, Shortleaf pine but it HAD been faithfully deflecting the Tennessee sun and weather for almost fifty years. A prayer would not be amiss.

“That would not be a good idea” Alice told him, although she did not specify whether she was referring to her opening the door or Lightning’s threat to break the door.

Then she clarified “As a good Christian woman, I have to tell you that you will not come to a good end if you don’t repent and change your ways.”  Her voice was not quavering as she dropped her "helpless" act.

“Fuck you, bitch” Lightning sneered and threw his weight against the door. He was going to shoot the bitch as soon as he broke in. He figured it would be mistaken for the sound of thunder.

To his surprise, Lightning bounced off the door. Roger, in fact all of the men, had taken the precaution of bracing their front doors with lengths of 2-by-4s with the ends secured not in the door frame but in the studs to either side of the door frames. Twelve, 3” deck-screws sunk into full-dimension studs, two lengths (on high, one low) for each door of knot-free two-by-fours.

Upstairs, Lliam could feel the entire front of the house breath in-and-out like the head of a drum.

Roger depressed the switch that Gregor had wired into the 200,000 lumen spot-light fifty feet to his left and illuminated the front of his house.

Dropping the pendant, Roger started shooting the man on his porch from a distance of ten yards away. The man was easily larger than any black bear Roger had ever seen.

Lightning reacted instinctively at the sudden, blinding brightness and the sound of the shotgun reports coming from Davey's side of the porch. He vaulted over the porch railing and dashed for the two-track that led to the SUV.

Sig saw Lightning’s exit and started banging away from a distance of 40 yards...and rapidly increasing. He got off three shots.

The huge man was still standing when Roger’s 1100 ran dry. Backing away from the porch and then deeper into the shadows, Roger dropped to one knee, flipped his shotgun over and started jamming shells into the magazine.
 

Roger looked up from his task as the “bear” crashed through the railing of the porch and started toward him.

Without turning over his shotgun or aiming, Roger hooked the bolt-handle of his shotgun with the pinkie of his right hand and pulled it back and and then released it. Still holding his shotgun upside-down with his left hand gripping the barrel and forearm and braced against the outside of his left thigh, he emptied it into the giant’s center-of-mass.

The giant collapsed.

Five shots. Roger’s ears were ringing from the blast reflected by the side of the house.

Lliam was blinded by the light.

Sig was looking for somebody to shoot but there were no targets.

Blain stayed where he was and scanning for threats. Nothing!

After what seemed like a minute, Roger turned off the spotlight. Then he picked it up and pointed it where the drive broke through the trees and turned it back on. He slowly scanned the clearing.

Down the hill, two shots fired in quick succession. Then two more….a slight pause...another shot….and then another.

Sig called out “Blain, I think they are gone. Come out so we can make a plan.”

Then the two men walked over to Roger. Roger pointed to the slumped over giant who was barely visible in the light pollution caused by the spotlight.

“We gonna need the tractor to move that one” Lliam said as he joined the group.

***

Sig detailed Blain with going down the foot-path to make contact with Gregor.

Every fifty yards or so, Blain made a hoot-owl call with three hoots. It was a quirk that the local owls either hooted twice or many times more than twice, nearly always in even numbers. Only humans hooted three times.

Fifty yards out from where Gregor was expected to be, Blain got a return call of three hoots. Blain walked over to where Gregor was standing. He had not walked down to inspect his targets. There was no point. It was still dark and turning on a light when there were still enemies around didn’t seem like a good idea.

“How many?” Blain asked quietly.

“Two” Gregor responded.

“We got one still unaccounted for” Blain informed Gregor. “Sig said we’ll go looking for him a half-hour after sunrise.”

Blain could barely make out Gregor’s nodding confirming that he had heard.

“I’ll stay here” Gregor said. “Somebody’s gotta be the cork in the bottle.”

“OK” Blain said. “I’ll let the others know.”

***

They found Lightning’s body below the first hair-pin curve. Three or four pellets of buckshot from Sig had tagged him. In his pain or panic or diminished mental capacity from lack of blood, that tall man with the Nazi tattoos had not seen or had been unable to make the sharp turn. His momentum had carried him down the steep slope until his tumble was arrested by the dense brush.

The leaf-cover on the ground around was torn up. There was not much blood on the ground. Sig surmised that the attacker had bled-out internally.

He had not been dead very long. His face was warm and his limbs had not stiffened up.

***

The pockets of the men were checked. The bodies were stuffed into the SUV. The tires were repaired and Gregor drove them four miles closer to the Tennessee River before parking the SUV beside the road. He took the precaution of turning the vehicle around so it would look like it had been driven from town rather than from the Cumberland Plateau.

Then Gregor walked back home following foot-trails.

He ditched Lightning’s phone in a spring freshet, pinning the phone to the bottom of a temporary pool with a twenty-pound rock.


35 comments:

  1. And so the Bad Guys came to a Death of Natural Causes (because people who engage in B&E often come to that same cause of death) And Good Riddance.

    I would have added that Gregor wiped down the vehicle of any fingerprints and change shoes at the vehicles to leave different prints than his normal shoe. Prints left behind often snare the unlucky.

    Thank you ERJ - I enjoyed it..

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  2. Hmmm... I would have expected Lightning to somehow get away, to cause more trouble later. but there's still "techie dude" out there somewhere.

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    1. I don't have a strong instinct regarding the best way to advance the story-line: Chase down the remnants of Lightning's operation -or- focus on the people of Copperhead Cove.

      My inclination is to get back to Copperhead Cove after a quick closure of the event that just happened.

      Please chime in. Should I write about the trajectories of the collection of misfits who were following Lightning (Vote with an "L") or write about Copperhead Cove (Vote with a CC).

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    2. CC. I'd like to meet Blain & Sarah's children

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    3. CC- I expected them to be buried deep with lime, but with them gone, the tweakers will move on to find easier pickings.
      irontomflint

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    4. I suggest continuing with the CC storyline, occasionally interspersed with outside interaction.
      Jonathan

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    5. Concentrate on the Cove with the town and local law enforcement's reaction to a car-load of ner-do-wells, perhaps?

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  3. Hopefully the local police will do "Good Police Work" and ignore the problem, thus closing the book here. Our Folks call it feeding the bears. Problem gone.

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    1. Yeah, local sheriff will know the methheads, townsfolk will consider it a favor, and not ask any questions....

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  4. Thank you for the story. Maybe an after action report and move on withCC

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  5. L + CC + L + CC + CC + CC + CC + CC ! ! !

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  6. Thank you. CC You developed Lightning. He is gone. There are no, living, charaters in that direction.

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    1. Cartel and wannabe cartel, criminals looking to enhance their standing in the criminal brotherhood, then the garden variety opportunist thugs.

      Town folk may come ti find fault with CC. They got rid of hard criminals which then created a vacuum which other criminals see as opportunity.
      Town folk may think if only those separatists up at the Cove left things alone. Or, why not let the Sheriff handle it. What, those Cove dwellers think they're vigilantes, the law not apply to them?

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  7. Loved it, I'm torn between the two directions but leaning to CC

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  8. ...then there is also the possible story arc of the shunned vidictive evil Constance... it is written (John 16) 'you will have many trials and toubles in this life'.

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    1. Dubious as evil manipulative users like Constance are seldom physical. And in the shark tank of the Meth World she'd be at worst one of the meth slaves after her bank account was stolen.

      Now Drone Pervert *Might* have some trouble left in him, passing onward to OTHER Meth Cookers (There are ALWAYS more than one in an area) that there is target locations.

      I'd keep the sensors on for years to come.

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  9. So THREE rounds of 00 buckshot from Roger's 1100 - into Davey at 10yds did not stop him? Maybe his nerves got the better of him...

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    1. Penetration issues due to fat, exacerbated by the fact that heart-lungs-CSN are no larger in an enormously fat man than they are in an anorexic dude. Where to aim?

      Finally, a total loss of blood-pressure (blown-up heart or completely severed aorta) leaves the victim with about 10 seconds of fully conscious thought and ability to commit mayhem. Thirty seconds of not fully conscious thought and three full minutes of twitches and motions but no direction or coordination.

      A completely severed major artery like the femoral artery might increase those times by 4X. A severed secondary artery in the lungs might increase by 10X-to-100X.

      In TV shows and Movies, every second of needless dwelling on post-hit responses is one less second that can be sold for advertising. Consequently, people who watch TV expect BANG-FLOP! with every single pull of the trigger.

      Davey was probably dead when he crashed through the railing but did not know it yet. Roger didn't know why Davey was not falling down but it didn't seem like an appropriate time to discuss it with him.

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  10. ----------------------------------------------------------------------------------


    “We got one still unaccounted for”


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    1. This alone would be worth one post unto itself…

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  11. And Blaine doesn't have to shoot... Interesting twist.

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    1. He didn't shoot but he did keep the back-door shut so Roger and Sig could focus on the task-at-hand.

      I played with several story lines that had more involvement with Blain but Sig and Roger kept over-ruling me. They would not let Blain fail because then the team would fail.

      Would you let Blain wander around the woods alone with hostiles on the loose? Would you trust him to ruthlessly execute two runners the way Gregor did or would he choke or get himself shot?

      Given the players and their skill levels, Blain had to be plugged into a simple, passive role which he was unlikely to screw up.

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  12. Agree with Anon at 9:38, one still unaccounted for! You trying to get over on us? With the unaccounted for and techie guy, you have a nice little kernel for further mayhem. I'm up for CC but I know L is in there somewhere.

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  13. I vote with anon at 8:08 am for story line. Good story telling!
    Oxygenated, methed and adrenalined people can go for a bit longer than your times according to a retired Seal Team six buddy of mine. After hanging out with him and his buddies in So. Cal., I was thoroughly disabused of any Hollywierd notions of magic bullets, The closest thing to magic bullets is definitely the 12 ga. with buck shot.

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    1. 12 GA slugs are closer; long's you hit.
      ERJ - CC!

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  14. 4 for 4 is excellent. I figured Ol' Sparky would be gone in a flash. But him taking a header and then tearing up the ground like a wounded armadillo is just as good. Keep on the CC and sprinkle a bit of touch and goes with the locals. I am interested in B&S. Miss Alice did a good bait and switch. She's suddenly interesting to me. I thought about Constance, but I'm trusting she won't last long as a bottom rung in the new digs. Maybe a plea to return and be extra nice and kind? As if....

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  15. CC - Sean North is mostly harmless on his own, and will scoot once he realizes that his boss and buddies aren't coming back. He might send the drone over one last time, but won't visit in person.

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  16. Somebody needs to make the cell jammer disappear too... Lightening may have left prints on it if he wasn't careful.

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    1. It may come in handy for the CC home team the future. I’d keep it.

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  17. There are a lot of loose ends that potentially could form the continuation of a number of story lines. Namely:

    1) Lightning had a lucrative business and there will be a lot of addicts out there still needing their "fix". Nature abhors a vacuum and someone will step into the position.

    2) Techie Dude is used to the easy good times and good things and he has useful information for the next dealer. He will know where lightning went that night (Lightning was mad at him for not finding suitable victims and that was the best one he found) and could sell that information on. CC is not out of the woods yet. That information about the location and warning that CC is alert and has defences is very useful to anyone wanting to do the same.

    3) Constance has a malicious streak and she will no doubt spread rumours and outright lies about CC to anyone that will listen. That is bound to come to the ears of the authorities who may take an interest ... CC can expect a visit from various agencies who may confiscate weapons, food etc., if not now, then earmark it for future problems where shortages of food arise.

    4) As I recall, Blake found his way to CC because of the way society was breaking down/becoming more authoritarian so that is a factor to consider. Otherwise, why would CC spend all their scarce and valuable money on buying up primers and powder? Blake will have to learn to reload ammunition and sooner rather than later. I could teach him ... >};o)

    Personally, I would have set fire and burned out Lightnings car with the bodies in it. That destroys a hell of a lot of forensic evidence, including his phone which may be found after the winter flooding of the stream brings it to somewhere where it could be found. The SIM card is likely to be serviceable. That is a hole in their hiding of the evidence.

    Phil B

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  18. Again, great writing ERJ.

    My vote is focus on the folks of CC. Post-apocalyptic violence is easy to find. Actual practical measures to survive it, less so.

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  19. Is there a backstory for Blain? I used the search, found his original name and searched some more, but there's nothing that really tells you how he came to want to disappear. I'm sure I'm missing it somewhere.

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    1. http://eatonrapidsjoe.blogspot.com/2023/09/disappearing.html

      He changed his name as part of his disappearing act

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