Wednesday, March 13, 2024

The Game is Afoot (Cumberland Saga)

Pale-green shaded area is forested. Double-line is two-track. Dashed line is foot-trail. "B", "S", and "R" are Blain's, Sig's, Roger's positions, respectively. Gregor's position at the end of this segment is identified with a "G" and an arrow pointing to where he is standing. 


Lightning snarled at Ralph. “Stop stepping on my heels, fnck-wit!”

The men were walking up the dark two-track in very tight formation. Ralph was following so closely to Lightning that he was stepping on the backs of his shoes. The cheap pistols the men carried seemed very inadequate against any beasts that roamed the inky blackness of the Tennessee night. The illusion was heightened by the redoubled baying of the hounds just as they passed the second hair-pin turn. 

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Gregor was making good time down the footpath but he was not running. He was more concerned about twisting an ankle than about making noise. The rush of the wind and the creak and rubbing of branches made a great deal of noise as he moved down the path toward the road. He heard the dogs’ increased frenzy and knew that he didn’t have time to lollygag.

Roger had to put the switch down on the ground. He had been overcome with anxiety and really wanted to test it one more time. This wasn’t like “jacking” deer. Deer don’t shoot back.

Sig stoically stood next to the lilac bush he remembered his mother planting. The human eye is trained to recognize human silhouettes. By merging his form with the irregular form of the bush, he greatly reduced the odds of the invaders being able to pick him out of the clutter.

Blain sat behind his woodpile. He kept repeating the very short prayer Sig had taught him. Oddly, Sig told him it was the tax-collector's prayer “God, be merciful to me. I am a sinner”*.

All three men startled when they heard the "rinky-tinky-dink-dink-dink" of the second motion activated chime and the dog's erupting again. It reminded Blain of the lame tune that the ice-cream trucks of his youth had played.

Lliam saw them first, given the advantage of young eyes and an elevated position. He was on the second floor of Roger’s house looking out the window. They were a scant 40 yards from his position.

Level ground is a precious commodity in the Tennessee uplands. Very little is wasted on “yards”. Consequently, the houses were crowded close to the slopes that were untillable and barely even grazable and were thus given over to trees.

Lliam counted four faces. In the daylight, it would not have been a challenge to hit four bleach bottles at that distance with his .22LR, but it was not daytime and faces move and Sig had told him in tones that brooked no argument that his job was over-watch and to assist Blain from elevation if things went to hell. 

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Lightning gave the two men who were following him and Davey ungentle shoves. One he pushed to the right and the other to the left. They reluctantly separated from the group and assumed positions, backing into the brush to either side of where the drive opened up into the clearing that defined the compound.

They were there to stop, by any means required, any strays that might think they could flee the compound. Lightning knew that even one witness would send them all back to prison.

No escapees. Stop them. By. Any. Means. Required. 

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Roger almost swallowed his dentures when Lightning and Davey purposefully walked along the two-track past his house. That was totally unexpected.

Sig was silently tracking them and was surprised when they did not angle off the two-track and head for his porch.

Blain was on the verge of peeing-his-pants when the two men abruptly stopped in the middle of the two-track directly in front of Sig's house. One of them pulled something out of a tote-bag. Blain could not make out what it was but he could hear one of the men grunt with satisfaction when multi-colored LEDs started blinking. The taller man leaned over and gently placed the blinking box on the ground.

Then the men reversed direction and started walking toward Roger’s house. 

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“Remember, we gotta keep moving” Lightning growled at Davey. “The jammer only has enough battery for about five minutes.”

The plan was simple. Each man had a pocket full of zip-ties and there were rolls of duct-tape in the tote-bag. Lightning was counting on pain-compliance and fear of the pistols to keep the residents quiet while they were subdued.

Lightning was something of an expert on pain-compliance although until recently it had all been on the receiving end. The key, in his mind, was to apply pain to the women and the men would roll-over like a female collie.

Davey stood to Lightning’s right, on the hinge-side of the door.

Lightning turned the knob and pushed. The door moved in a quarter-inch and stopped. Lightning frowned. Most people in the sticks didn’t even lock their doors at night. This was unexpected.

Lightning knocked. Then he knocked harder.

“Who is it?” an elderly, female voice quavered. Alice was putting on a show. Her job was to stall as along as possible.

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Gregor found the car down by the public road. From a distance, he looked through the side window to see if there was anybody in it. Quickly scanning around, he did not see anybody outside the car. It would be just his luck to have the driver taking a leak.

It was with regret that Gregor stabbed each of the four tires through the tread with an ice-pick. Given his druthers, he would have lifted the hood and yanked a cable off one of the battery terminals but he didn’t know how to open the hood without opening a door and causing the dome-light to come on. If there WERE any bad-guys in the area, that would surely alert them.

Four flat tires would not stop the enemy from fleeing but it would certainly slow them down.

Hearing the air hissing out, Gregor then made haste back to the east hair-pin. Once there, Gregor found the heavy-duty carabiners on the ends of the two lengths of tan-colored paracord that had been laid across the two-track. He clipped the ends of the two trip-cords to ropes that had been tied about fifteen inches up the trunks of two saplings that were conveniently growing beside the two-track just up-hill of the hair-pin turn. The trip-cords were five-feet apart.

The height of the trip-cords had been a subject of debate. If they were too low then the fleeing enemy might unknowingly step over it. Too high and it might not topple the targets or they might break the paracord. The men figured 5" would be optimum if the targets were walking and maybe 10" if they were running on flat, smooth ground. But this was downhill and the ground was uneven, consequently the target of the trip-cords might be getting way up in the air.

Gregor got off the two-track and positioned so he could look down the final leg of the two-track from the last hair-pin to where the SUV was parked. Before he leaned against the trunk of a tree to wait, he reached into his pocket and pulled out three more shotgun shells. He wedged them between the fingers of his left hand. They were to be his quick reload if he ran dry.  It was a trick that Sig had taught him when he was eight...A practiced shooter can get four shots out of a break-open, single-shot shotgun almost as quickly as a novice can fire them out of a repeater.

 

*Luke 18:13

24 comments:

  1. "Lliam counted four faces. In the daylight, would" - s/b he would?
    Looking forward to the upcoming festivities

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  2. Looking forward to the crescendo. Cell phone jammers and drones vs honest men with shotguns. Details at 11:00

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  3. Reminds me of that line from that movie... I'm not locked in here with you, YOU'RE ALL LOCKED IN HERE WITH ME!!!!

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  4. Titanium straws, end cut at steep angle (to avoid plugging up) and filed sharp will empty a tire of air faster. Wrap straw with cord tightly until hand filling and cover with friction tape for comfort. Stab into sidewall.

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    1. Through the tread is better - you can repair a puncture in that area. A side wall puncture means that the tyre is ruined and cannot be repaired.

      To the victor, the spoils etc. and I'm sure that the people of Cumberland gap will be pleased to have four tyres for free.

      Phil B

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  5. The suspense is killing me!

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    1. Also a version of The Jesus Prayer:

      "Lord Jesus Christ,
      Son of God,
      have mercy on me,
      a sinner."

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  7. If you stab the tyres through the tread then you can repair them for your own use afterwards.

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    1. If you remove the valve stems you won't have to repair the tires.
      You could also loop a steel cable between a tree and either the axle or the trailer hitch so the truck can't go anywhere.
      Jonathan

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    2. Yeah, those little screwdrivers are about 2 dollars at Harbor Freight, take the valve out of the stem, put it back in later.

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    3. I had someone do it to me in college...
      Jonathan

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  8. heals- heels
    stoicly- stoically

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    1. tax-collectors prayer -> tax-collector's OR tax-collectors' prayer
      On tenterhooks here, Joe. Thank you.

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  9. Don't stab tires. Just use a pair of pliers to cut the valve stems below the Schrader valve.

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  10. Loving the drama. I almost feel bad for the bad guys, they are in for a surprise.

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  11. I don't feel bad for the bad guys at all. I wish I could give them what they deserve.

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  12. Agree with the others, tires are 'precious'. Go through the tread!

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  13. Air rushing through the valve stem or lack there of makes a lot of noise.

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    1. There would be more noise of air escaping through a small obstructed hole rather then the clear air passage through the straw.

      Point taken on saving tire placing on patchable tread. Harder on the instrument, especially if plys are encountered. Also - harder to find room to articulate arm to stab tire.

      How will these vehicles be gotten rid of without creating suspicion of crime to future law enforcement ? And if they are stolen vehicles from the outset, won't that even cause more attention to the residents of this small community ?

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  14. Repeating the question of an earlier commenter-aren't there more families at the cove? I just assumed they were, but weren't mentioned because they weren't important to the story line. there were several teen girls present when Constanz blew up, who do they live with? Seems like there would be at least a half dozen households.

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    1. There are many more families but they are scattered. Lightning only knows what Techie-Dude recorded. He knows about three houses.

      As an author, one of the difficulties is keeping straight who knows what. It is easy to have a character act on a piece of information I, the narrator, knows or what has been revealed to another character.

      Another thing that happens is that I will start mentally rehearsing the story in my head and Lightning or Sig or Gregor will tap me on the shoulder and tell me "That is not how I would do it..." That means I have to trim the puzzle pieces and make adjustments in other places.

      If Lightning and company are successful in taking over the three houses and their inhabitants, it would turn into a real zhit-show for him...and for many of the residents of Copperhead Cove.

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  15. Even though it appears that the good guys are going to have the drop on the bad guys, any time bullets start flying, the situation becomes dangerous and unpredictable. Also, it is troubling that Sig, Gregor, Blain, et al do not have any kind of radio communication with each other should things suddenly go sideways.

    Another thing, even though Lightning and his crew are all scumbags worthy of summary execution, I wonder if our God fearing good guys actually have the heart and the stomach to do what needs to be done. There is a reason why the Army and the Marine Corps condition new recruits to shoot without hesitation. It is not a normal human reaction in our civilized Western culture to point a gun at another human being and actually pull the trigger. I hope our boys are able to be as ruthless as needed in the instant it is needed.

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